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Looking at this cup of coffee... sitting all alone,
Everything around me tells me that he is gone.
Rain also whispers this cruel alert,
my heart mourns like a misfortune bird.
Windows seems to cry, they shed their tears wet,
My future is silent,on the past I have no regret.
I still havn't found whoes mistake it was,
neither anyone told me the reason, why he was cross.
They shout n' scream that he is gone,
its wasting of time to cry n' wait from dusk till dawn.
The naked carcess of my love waits for its funeral,
nothing seems to retain..!
How can I tell that he can't be gone until,
IN MY EYES HIS FACE REMAINS!!!
:iconsleepless-grl:
A collaboration between me n' a very sweet girl Erin (whisperwolf) [link]
I've always loved this deviation n' im very thankful to Erin for being so sweet n' leting me use it
If you want to comment on the shot, plz follow the link [link]
n' if you have something for the artist, here is the easy way [link] :)

And I'll love to say something about the title
"fay" is a word that comes in the meaning of "Faith" and "Belief" n' in this poem, despite all the happenings.. the belief is still there so I thought there is no other suitable title for it.

By the wat "fay" is my nick name too
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~Lovespoon Jun 21, 2006  Professional Writer
I like this line.

The naked carcess of my love waits for its funeral,
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~Lovespoon Jun 26, 2006  Professional Writer
oki. Great line.
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:iconsleepless-grl:
Oh! I love this line...
In fact this poem has a lot abt my personal life n at the time when I wrote it, this line was ruling all over my senses.
Thanks for the comment :)
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:iconrebel56:
love never dies or get defeated.
faith never ends n it shudnt be.
ur fay woz, iz n vil be around.
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:iconsleepless-grl:
"ur fay woz, iz n vil be around"

Thank you so much for the comment :)
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:iconrebel56:
he hee... u vacum:giggle:
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:iconwhisperwolf:
Wow your writing really is so beautiful! And of course using the last line of what you wrote in the comment of my work, I'm so glad you did coz I simply love that line! I love that bit about the title being 'fay' because of what it means in terms of the word and yet also what it means to you, being your nickname. It's very beautiful and I'm glad to have done this collaboration with you :D Thank you!! :hug:
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:iconsleepless-grl:
I was waiting for ur comment girlie :D

I gave this poem a very sad n' depressed impression where whole world tells the story of defeat in love but in the last line the real faith of love speaks out..
What I can say simply is that "Love is faith" and faith always reflect from your eyes.
Thank you soooo much for giving me this beautiful chance :hug:
I also feel so glad n' honoured to do this collaboration :cuddle:
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:iconwhisperwolf:
Awww you're very welcome! :hug: I love the whole faith idea behind it.. and thank you for your lovely words about faith reflecting in my eyes :blushes:

I am equally glad to do the collaboration :hug: If you ever want to do another one then that'd be wonderful :) Take care xx
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:iconsleepless-grl:
we'll surely do another one :hug:
Thank you very much for all the support n' such nice words. :)
Take good care :hug:
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